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asakiyume ([personal profile] asakiyume) wrote2013-02-21 03:45 pm

The Case of Lauren Gray








Lauren Gray is the owner of a fictionalized life, the result of a decision she made on a day in 1973, after overhearing her mother and her nana talking about her nana’s diaries. “I’m discovering all sorts of things from your childhood and before that I simply don’t recall at all,” her nana was saying. “I’ve been reading them aloud to your father. ‘Do you remember being evacuated from a sinking ferry in 1936?’ I’ll ask him. Some things he remembers, others are news to him too. It’s almost like reading someone else’s diary.”

“You’ve had a more exciting life than you thought,” observed Lauren’s mother.

Lauren went upstairs, took her own diary out from her sock-and-underwear drawer, and began to read.

Today in art we worked on clay. Mine is very good. I hope I like it when we are done. Mr. Williams got mad at me for fooling around when we were meant to be working on our projects. After school the Browns came over.

Lauren sighed. It didn’t exactly set your heart racing.

Previous entry: Today in gym I ran. My time is awful. In language arts I wrote a report. After school I did my homework. When I was finished I played with Lisa.

Downright boring. When she got to be Nana’s age and reread her old diaries, what would there be to surprise and delight her? As things stood, nothing.

Lauren took a pencil from the milk-carton pencil holder she’d made in art last year and contemplated an entry for the day. She thought of the filmstrip they’d seen in social studies, “Krihisiwa: Child of the Amazon,” about a boy from the Yamomamo tribe in Brazil. She chewed on the eraser end of the pencil. At last she started to write.

We have a new kid in school. His name is Krihisiwa. He used to live in the Amazon rain forest.

She thought about the details of the filmstrip.

He told us that where he comes from, they eat grubs, she wrote. Everyone said that was gross but I told him I wouldn’t mind eating a grub. Lauren wrinkled her nose. That was not true, but maybe her future self would be impressed by her dietary adventurousness. She wrote on.

After school, he asked me if I wanted to learn how to shoot a big bow, like the kind they use where he’s from.

Lauren smiled to herself. She could see—could practically remember—Krihisiwa, could see the astonished faces of her classmates, could hear Krihisiwa’s voice. He’d have some kind of accent, but she’d be able to understand him. Her toes tingled and her cheeks felt warm.

She was going to have the most exciting life ever.


[identity profile] cucumberseed.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
She was going to have the most exciting life ever.

This is excellent.

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks--the possibilities of an unreliable diary are intriguing.

[identity profile] xjenavivex.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 09:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank *you* for reading :-)

[identity profile] cafenowhere.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
She was going to have the most exciting life ever.

You go, Lauren Gray!

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
There are so many ways I'd like to play with this idea--Lauren's case study is a good start point, though.

[identity profile] sartorias.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this.

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! So happy :-)

[identity profile] bogwitch64.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Will there be more of this fictionalized life?

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
The case studies are all just one-offs, but I definitely am going to play around more with this idea!

[identity profile] yamamanama.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Grubs can't be that much different from shrimp.

I remember learning about the Yanomami in high school.

[identity profile] amaebi.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
An entomologist friend of mine told me, "all those arthropods taste more or less alike." I have lived by these words ever since. :)

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
My first experience of them by name was in the picture book The Great Kapok Tree (http://www.lynnecherry.com/the_great_kapok_tree__a_tale_of_the_amazon_rain_forest_19411.htm) (which has gorgeous illustrations--do you know it?)

[identity profile] yamamanama.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not familiar with it.

(speaking of books with gorgeous illustrations, I wish I could remember the name of a book I had as a child... but I don't know anything about it)

[identity profile] coffeesvp.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
She was going to have the most exciting life ever.
You probably have written the biography and revealed the heart of every author, and every artist of any discipline, in one sentence.

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 12:21 am (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, maybe so! ^_^

[identity profile] amaebi.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome! I do hope she won't be disappointed when she learns of the misogyny of Yanomamo culture. :)

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
Probably those details weren't covered in Lauren's filmstrip (and remember, it was only 1973 when she saw it, so instead there was probably lots of condescending talk about "primitive peoples"), but if she got whiff of the truth, she'd probably so construct Krihisiwa as to be young enough and open enough to not see her (and perhaps not any girl) as a "mere girl."

[identity profile] frigg.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohhh very cool!

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, pleased you think so!
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[personal profile] pjthompson 2013-02-22 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
Charming!

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
^_^ delighted you enjoyed!

[identity profile] khiemtran.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 06:48 am (UTC)(link)
Her unfortunate case of temporary amnesia in 1997 made her life even more interesting.

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah you heard about that, did you! Yes, that is what called her to my attention.

[identity profile] wuweibaby.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 11:58 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, please :)

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, I'll share my future thoughts on this strange situation when I have them written up!

[identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 02:14 pm (UTC)(link)
She might have a boring life, Miss Lauren Grey, but I think she'll end up going places with that imagination of hers. ;)

[identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, I have a feeling she went on to make her actual life as exciting as her diary!